Mastering ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ and the Art of Prequel Storytelling: Better Call Saul

Viewers who watched Breaking Bad loved the thrill of being along for the ride of its’ protagonist’s transformation from a mild-mannered chemistry teacher to a drug kingpin. Fans rooted for Walter White as he committed increasingly evil acts as they curiously awaited the peak of his empire and its’ inevitable end. There was a certain allure to watching Walt let go of his fears and realizing his full, monstrous potential.

Better Call Saul, a prequel, focuses on the sleazy, ‘criminal’ criminal lawyer and comic relief, ‘Saul Goodman, introduced in Season 2 and a popular character till the end, where he disappears under the alias ‘Gene Takovic,’ a Cinnabon store manager in Omaha, to avoid being arrested.

Unlike the thrill of Walt’s transformation, much of Saul’s fate is already known when Better Call Saul begins. The show gets his post Breaking Bad fate out of the way in the first scene.

The show is set in 2002, 6 years before Saul’s appearance in Breaking Bad, showing us an empathetic, caring, and charming Jimmy McGill, which begs the question – how did this person become the Saul who casually suggested that Walt kill his close friend and brother-in-law?

Granted that there is a lot of room for comedy, given that Jimmy/Saul’s character has a great sense of humor, and Jimmy is constantly up to some ‘chicanery.’ However, there is no addictive thrill here because you see an earnest, hardworking Jimmy. The show works backward; instead of showing you how a person goes from being a teacher to a meth kingpin, this shows the trajectory of someone whose doomed fate you already know. It’s a fatalistic tragedy of moral decay.

How do you make a tragedy like that not only watchable but entertaining and even addictive?

The premise does not look like an easy watch.

The show does this by:

a) Introducing new, likable, and interesting characters who don’t exist in Breaking Bad, which makes you wonder, what happens to them by the end of Better Call Saul

Kim Wexler, who doesn’t appear in Breaking Bad

b) Bringing in characters from Breaking Bad, whose backgrounds and connected paths with Saul viewers always wanted to understand. The shows feel more like a Saul-Mike-Hector-Gus prequel than a standalone Saul Goodman one.

Mike/ Season 1
Hector/ Season 2
Gus/ Season 3

c) Introducing two characters to tie up all the loose ends between the pilot of Better Call Saul and the homonymous episode of Breaking Bad

d) Lastly, and most importantly, by perfecting the ‘show, don’t tell‘ approach of storytelling. Instead of using the technique to immerse the viewer into the story and avoid exposition, the show masterfully uses this technique to add mystery and tension in a way no other show can, despite showing you precisely what the characters are doing.

Breaking Bad gave away little about Saul’s origins but revealed that Saul Goodman was not his real name and that his real last name was McGill. He tells Walter during their first meeting, “The Jew thing I just do for the homeboys. They all want a pipe-hitting member of the tribe, so to speak.”. Bob Odenkirk noted in an interview that his Breaking Bad caricature is often shown only as a lawyer, in ‘work mode.’

This gave the creators a lot of freedom on working with these characters. The same applies for Mike, Hector, and Gus Fring.


Comedy

The first unique use of Show, Don’t Tell we see is in S01E04, where Jimmy has come into a bunch of money, and you see him at a high-end tailor. The requests, although specific, seem to be in good taste at first, just giving the impression that he’s treating himself with the finer things in life.

However, as the requests get told from a piece of paper, and increasingly specific, ‘Pinstripe Blue suit’, ‘Super 170 Tasmanian wool’, ‘sea island cotton, and a white club collar and French cuffs’, you start to suspect that some classic Slippin’ Jimmy shenanigans are at play.

By the time we get to Jimmy changing his hair at the nail salon parlor, we’re starting to catch on.

When you get the final product, which is Jimmy making a billboard advertisement dressed exactly like Howard Hamlin, his nemesis, you can’t help but laugh. The whole 6 minute setup above works like a long joke, with the final shot below its punchline.

A lot of fun in the show comes not from wondering what the characters are going to do, like in most television, but rather why they are doing what they’re doing – and sometimes, when we know the why, figuring out how the action is going to lead to their desired outcome.

The show plays a lot with the concept of moderate incongruity – letting you reconcile seemingly unrelated actions with plot points mentioned earlier that seem only mildly related. In the case above, Jimmy was peeved that he was asked not to use his own last name ‘McGill’ at his law practice as he shared the name with his older, more successful brother, who was a partner of Howard Hamlin at Hamlin Hamlin McGill. This does not seem to reconcile directly with the 6 minutes of actions that follow till you realize that the whole ploy was intentionally used to downplay his use of the McGill name. Solving the puzzle before the show gets to it is half the fun.


Empathy

Most of the characters in the Breaking Bad/Better Call Saul universe, including Saul and Mike, are morally ambiguous at best. However, they do have a lot of redeeming qualities, especially in the years before Breaking Bad.

In a later season, Chuck says about Jimmy, “My brother is not a bad person. He has a good heart. It’s just…he can’t help himself.”.

However, by this time, we don’t need Chuck to tell us this to know this about Jimmy because we’ve seen this for ourselves.

The show doesn’t tell us to care about Jimmy or sympathize with Mike. It shows us them struggling in their daily lives and trying their best to stick to their principles in difficult circumstances.

In Season 1, we see Jimmy and Mike deliver the 1.6 million dollars to a district attorney that Mike helped him ‘steal’ from the Kettlemans to get them to accept a guilty plea. Jimmy does it to help his friend Kim and to do ‘the right thing.’ When he asks Mike why he didn’t run away with the money, Mike says, “I was hired to do a job. I did it.”

Here’s a ‘blink and you’ll miss it’ shot – Mike, usually stoic but firm about the rules at his parking attendant job, waves off a car without checking their fees because he’s on the phone and getting a chance to babysit his granddaughter.

Consider the below. We know that Jimmy’s brother, Chuck has a mental condition where he feels that he is allergic to electromagnetic fields and thus can’t bear any electronics nearby. Everyone leaves their electronics outside when going inside his house. Although this is something Chuck can notice, Chuck can’t know whether everyone has ‘grounded’ themselves by touching the metal rod outside his home before they come in. We are shown that Jimmy does this every time. It is respectable that Jimmy does it when they are on good terms, but you truly understand how much Jimmy respects and cares for his brother’s wishes when you see him doing it every time afterward when they don’t see eye to eye as well. These are subtle one-second shots that say so much about Jimmy.

Jimmy ‘grounding himself in S2E9
Jimmy asking Kim to do it
Jimmy grounding himself in S3E10, after Chuck has got him disbarred

Reduced exposition

The show goes out of its way to avoid unnecessary exposition, when the point is to add dramatic effect and the viewer can anyway reasonably guess what is being said. In the scene below, we know exactly what happened – without hearing a word – that HHM chose not to hire Jimmy – based on context and body language.


Organic Mystery

This approach also works well in building organic mystery and intensity and slowly dialing it up as we get to the final resolution or big reveal. Toward the end of Season 2, as Mike’s plan to shoot Hector in the desert with a long-range sniper nears its’ end, his car starts blaring, forcing him to abandon his plan and shut off the horn. He is left with a note, saying ‘DON’T.’ This arc continues in early Season 3, where for the most of the first episode, we deal with Mike’s paranoia and meticulous search for a tracker, as it is the only way someone could have known he was out there, and his attempt to use a similar one to find this mysterious person. The scenes span three episodes, about 40 minutes of screen time, and yet have no dialogue from Mike. This is a signature example of many Mike scenes, as they respect the audience’s intelligence and ability to interpret what’s going on.

Mike about to kill Hector.
The ‘DON’T’ sign.
Paranoid Mike.
Mike opens his toolbox to start checking the usual hiding spots.
Mike finding nothing.
Mike dismantling the car
Mike finding the tracker in the gas tank cap
Mike noting down the model and specifications of the tracker
Mike meeting a previously well established ‘fixer’ to source a similar tracker
Mike running the battery out on the original tracker, organically (by fixing it to a radio)
The battery still running out
Mike patiently having a stake out at home till the person who planted the tracker arrives
Mike starts following them
We are shown Mike watching the person go into some premises
The premises happen to be ‘Los Pollos Hermanos’, which we know from Breaking Bad to be Gus Fring’s restaurant

If you think the above is painstakingly detailed, it is. Many lesser shows would have settled with lazy writing and a character saying something along the lines of ‘I found a tracker and switched them to track the person who was tracking me.’ However, the way Better Call Saul deals with it also serves another purpose – of appreciation. Appreciation for


a) the meticulous, methodical nature of Mike


b) the resourcefulness, planning and patience, and lack of error that goes into what Mike does to stop being followed, but instead follow the person back without suspicion


c) the writers’ research into the smallest details and effort into making the final ‘aha!’ reveal feel earned for audiences.

The show is a masterclass in telling a story well when you already know the end, and in using patient, slow scenes to keep you addicted. It doesn’t try to grab your attention; it demands it.

But if you give it your attention, it will reward you.

Refreshing, Unconventional Superhero TV: Umbrella Academy

On October 1, 1989, forty-three infants are inexplicably born to random, unconnected women who showed no signs of pregnancy when the day began. Seven are adopted by Sir Reginald Hargreeves, a billionaire who creates The Umbrella Academy and prepares this group to save the world. In the present day, Sir Reginald Hargreeves has died, and the children reunite at his funeral.


The Umbrella Academy is a show for anyone who is tired of the excess of formulaic superhero stories.

Most (good and bad) superhero movies and shows have a tried and tested formula – fleshed-out origin story including the death of a parent, an accident or invention giving the titular character superpowers, a montage of them honing their skills to perfection, motivation to save the world or do some good, and a worthy supervillain adversary that defeats the superhero once, but loses the second time. It looks like this:

The opening scene shows one of such forty-three infants being born and bought by Reginald. After a shot of nannies carrying seven strollers that tricks you into believing a montage of the kids growing up and learning about their superpowers, the show cuts to the present day – introducing 5 of the seven members – now 30-year-olds- with only one of them actually fighting crime.


Their adoptive father has died, and most of them have moved on with their everyday lives.


Number 1/ Luther (super-strength) was working on a mission on the Moon.
Number 2/ Diego (good with knives) is the only one fighting crime.
Number 3/ Allison (who can control people by speaking out “rumors”) is now an actress.
Number 4/Klaus (can speak with the dead) is now a junkie just out of rehab.
Number 7/ Vanya (a violinist with anxiety and no superpowers, who always felt left out)
Number 5 (no other name) has just traveled back from the future, where he spent the last 50 years.
Number 6/ Ben (was killed at a point of time in the past)


In the present day, the ‘siblings’ have moved on with their lives, but their adoptive father’s death brings them together for his funeral.


The show revolves around the siblings’ reunion and their relationships with each other rather than the mystery of the impending apocalypse, which Five has witnessed and traveled back in time to stop.
Umbrella Academy stands out as a show that follows absolutely no formula in a world full of formulaic superhero stories – armies fighting armies, superheroes vs. supervillains, lofty ideals, and 30 min action sequences.


It makes this clear from the first 5 minutes of the show – only siblings 1-4 and 7 are introduced, pulling attentive viewers in with the mystery of where 5 and 6 are.


Also, as the superheroes are introduced as babies – the scene plays over ‘Picture Book’ by The Kinks, signifying the start of a montage – but instead cuts straight to the present day.


The UA is a dysfunctional family much more than a functional team. The siblings constantly mess up, fight, argue, and make up and reminisce. Their personal conflicts are endearing and relatable. Here is a beautifully shot scene with all the siblings in their rooms:

The show does a great job of bringing the siblings’ personalities to the foreground. The character traits define them, rather than their superpowers.


When you think about Five, the first thing that comes to your mind isn’t teleportation. It’s his intelligence and assertiveness. When you think of Klaus, you think hedonistic, lovable junkie before ‘I see dead people’


This GIF perfectly sums up Five and Klaus.

This works even better because the siblings don’t use their powers very often – because most of them aren’t superheroes anymore – whether it’s due to fear, guilt, trauma, or selfishness.


There is no formula for the plot either. Almost no one is good or bad. Everyone is just lying close to the middle of the spectrum, including most of the antagonists. Most characters are as clueless about what’s going on as the audience.


There is an intriguing mystery, a high body count, lots of styles, an amazing soundtrack, and beautiful production value.


But it’s perfectly balanced with introspection, irreverence, humor, and drama.

Cinematic Themes in Westworld

Westworld in UPPER CASE refers to the show, and Westworld in Sentence case refers to the theme park within the show.

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The remake of the Western, released in 1973, written by Michael Crichton, now headed by JJ Abrams and Jonathan Nolan, is just two episodes in and is already being called the next Game of Thrones.

WESTWORLD is a story of a theme park populated by artificial beings (the hosts) who start to develop consciousness. The humans (the guests) pay to visit this Wild West theme park to fulfill their gratifications on these hosts.


Is it solely because they’re both HBO shows and feature excessive nudity, violence, and profanity? Or is there a story of epic proportions in a richly detailed fictional world and universal truths about the human condition beneath this?

What I am trying to do here is try to see how many cinematic themes apply to WESTWORLD and not critically analyze the show or make a theory on either the future of the characters or their background and identity.

Therefore, this post contains minimal spoilers.

Below is a list of the characters that might be discussed later on:
a) Dr. Robert Ford, the co-founder and head scientist of Westworld – played by Anthony Hopkins
b) Dolores Abernathy, one of the hosts in the park – played by Evan Rachel Wood
c) The Man in Black, one of the regular guests – played by Ed Harris

Similarities such as those to Terminator 2: Judgement Day or Jurassic Park (also written by Michael Crichton) have not been mentioned here.

1) Blade Runner (1982) blade_runner_xlg

Often considered the most surreal sci-fi film due to detailed sets, a mix of the futuristic cyberpunk genre and the 1940s noir genres, the plot of this philosophical cult classic is simple: A Blade Runner (a cop named Deckard) is hired to track down and terminate four Replicants (robots with a four-year lifespan) who have returned to Earth to meet their creator.

The film encompasses various themes, some of which are most prominent in WESTWORLD.

  • a) What it means to be human. What separates us from robots? Is it just self-awareness? Sentience, or specifically, the presence of emotions?

In the film, by the end of Roy Batty’s poignant ‘All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in the rain’ monologue, most are left convinced he is more of a human being than those trying to kill him for not being one. On the other hand, Deckard is subtly shown to lack empathy as the story progresses, with hints that he might be a Replicant himself (although that is under debate, depending on the version you watched and whether you read the book it is based on or not).

Westworld’s programmed robots, the hosts, are shown not just as becoming sentient but might almost certainly act on their emotions in later episodes. But is that all it separates us from them? Does being human automatically guarantee that we are above other forms of life?

  • b) A related theme of Blade Runner was how we subject others to tests we would ourselves fail.

The literal test – the Voight Kampff test- determineed whether a subject is human or Replicant.

Deckard himself has not taken the test, and he is unable to determine, after a hundred questions, whether a Replicant is human or not. However, he intends to retire the four Replicants just because they are not human and, in turn, ends up being a hypocritical being further from humanity than his prey.

WESTWORLD makes you look at things from the hosts’ POV. We have always imagined the birth of AI and consciousness as something that lead to robots taking over the world. But what if they could be inherently good or learn to be?

The guests are the worse of the two, inflicting violence and malice on the hosts just because they can, revealing their darkest sides. So all that the hosts may learn is what they see, which is humans wreaking havoc on them.

  • c) The basic desire to meet their maker.

In Blade Runner, the Replicants have come to Earth to meet their maker to find a way to increase their short lifespan.

In WESTWORLD, one of the hosts says his itinerary is to meet his maker.

This desire is perhaps as human as the feeling of emotions.

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2) The Matrix (1999)

The 1999 Sci-Fi film centers on a character Neo, who is revealed the true nature of his reality; that it is a simulation and the real world is a ravaged wasteland where most of humanity has been captured by a race of machines that live off of the humans’ body heat and electrochemical energy and who imprison their minds within an artificial reality known as the Matrix.
Thinking about it from the point of view of the hosts of Westworld, their lives are meticulously planned, with storylines written by the park’s management with minor improvisations and in such a way that human guests can alter them if they interact in the storylines. This is, in essence, a simulation.
If the robots realized that they don’t live in the Wild West, but in the 21st century, where everything they thought was real was just programmed, they would get the feeling that Neo got when he realized he was in the Matrix.
Also, the opening scene of the show goes like this:

Man: Bring her back online. Can you hear me?

Woman, Western accent: Yes. I’m sorry. I’m not feeling quite myself.

Man: You can lose the accent. Do you know where you are?

Woman, standard accent: I’m in a dream.

Man: That’s right, Dolores. You’re in a dream.

Would you like to wake up from this dream?

Dolores: Yes. I’m terrified.

Man: There’s nothing to be afraid of, Dolores, as long as you answer my questions correctly. Understand?

Dolores: Yes.

Man: Good. First… have you ever questioned the nature of your reality?

(fly buzzes)

Dolores: No.

3) The Purge (2013)

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Unlike most other movies on this list, The Purge is not a Sci-Fi movie. It is a crime/ horror movie dealing with a scenario in future America where everyone gets a 12-hour pass to commit almost any crime they want, including murder, on Purge night, without consequences later.
Westworld guests have the same opportunity; they are given the freedom to be either good or bad. They could kill, rape, steal, all without consequences. They also benefit from knowing that they are doing it to robots who supposedly cannot feel it or remember it as they would be wiped clean after the session.

This would bring out their truest colors. Would you do something evil if you could get away with it?

4) The Truman Show the-truman-show.17800.jpg

The premise of The Truman Show is that Jim Carrey’s character, Truman is a lovable character living everyday life, going to work with a briefcase, shouting howdy to the neighbors as he leaves his home with a garden surrounded by a white picket fence.


But there’s something: Truman’s whole life, from his birth, is a reality TV show based on him, with everyone else playing roles in it except him. An entire synthetic world exists in Hollywood just for Truman. He is unaware that everything except him is scripted, human, but artificial. The real world is somewhere else. Millions of people tune in to watch Truman every day.


The hosts at Westworld share this with Truman too. Thousands of guests visit the theme park knowing the hosts are artificial, but they do not know that this is not the real world and that they exist just for entertainment.


Fun trivia: Ed Harris, who plays the creator of the show ‘The Truman show’, also stars in Westworld as the Man in Black, a regular guest who pays top money and wants to get to the deepest level of the game.

5) Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind (2004) or A Clockwork Orange (1971)

Both these films explore the idea of memories and whether it’s worth it to erase painful memories, which would give the characters a fresh start, but our memories make us who we are, and would we be the same we are if we were to start anew?


The hosts at Westworld are programmed to play out their storylines during the guests’ stay, and at the end of the cycle, their memories are erased, and they repeat the same thing, having no idea of what was done to them, hence ignorant and holding no prejudice against the guests, whom they call the newcomers.


“We all love the newcomers.”

6) Groundhog Day (1992) or Edge of Tomorrow (2014)

Groundhog Day is about one person reliving the same day (Groundhog Day- February 2nd) over and over again as whatever he does in a day; the day resets to 6 am the next morning with everything else the same except him. It is a cheerful, uplifting story as he uses it to know more and more about a woman he likes, as she is unaware that he’s lived the same day a hundred times over. Edge of Tomorrow also explores this concept of time resetting every day.


The regular guests at Westworld who either visit often or stay for weeks are in the same position as this. Knowing the hosts’ storylines, the regular guests would, after playing them out a few times, know what would happen when the girl dropped her can of food, the old man fell in the middle of the street, etc.
The Man in Black also references this during the show.


So, WESTWORLD is much more than a show with mindless violence.


To put it in the words of the fictional founder of the theme park, Dr. Robert Ford, played by Anthony Hopkins: “…. The titillation, horror, elation… They’re parlor tricks. The guests don’t return for the obvious things we do, the garish things. They come back because of the subtleties, the details.”


I think this is a very sly meta-reference to the show itself.

True Detective or Fargo?

Rust Cohle from True Detective( top) and Lorne Malvo from Fargo (bottom)
Rust Cohle from True Detective (top) and Lorne Malvo from Fargo (bottom)

So, two of the best critically acclaimed shows that aired this year have started this debate: Which show is the better one?

If you haven’t seen them, don’t worry, there are only mild spoilers here.

Both shows are anthologies, which means they would have a different cast and a different story every season. They both revolve around two times and involve law enforcement trying to hunt a baddie. While True Detective focuses more on the detectives, Fargo shows both sides: the cops and the baddies.

I liked both of them, but one better. So here is my slightly biased opinion.

Plot. TD follows an interview of two detectives on a case that they solved 17 years ago. The general arc is that the serial killer seems to still be alive. The story keeps switching between the past case and the interview, and that’s how we get to witness the character development. I felt however that the writers seemed to have lost their inspiration after about the fifth episode, and the big mystery that was building up and causing the anticipation for the show’s final episodes for two months was reduced to a very generic ending, neither fully resolved nor revealing a fearsome adversary.

Fargo. Not much can be said without revealing the plot, but first, it’s better if you watch The Coen Brothers’ movie first. The show follows the story 9 years after that and it involves a lone drifter who arrives at a small snowy town and influences the population with his violence and sets off a chain of crazy events, particularly for Lester Nygaard.

Characters. Although there are two detectives, Matthew McConaughey’s Rust Cohle got the much deserved attention.

His character is of a man very disturbed by his past, and the show regularly features his dark and nihilistic rants. You could say he’s a dark, brooding good guy. Marty, however is a man ruled by his emotions and impulsiveness, and often finds Rust strange, to say the least. Character development is observed only in these characters, though and the rest of the characters are just rural simpletons or women who have no other agenda than to get in bed with Marty.

Fargo’s lone drifter Lorne Malvo is completely different. Though we don’t know much about his past, we know and love his eccentricity. There are countless references to him being something supernatural, in a sense that he’s not human because he’s evil. He’s charming though, and if you like dark comedy, you will love his twisted shenanigans.

Martin Freeman’s character Lester however undergoes the most change throughout the season. I felt it tried to communicate several times the nature of Lester’s timid personality slowly gaining esteem to the point of ego, and not keeping it in check, and feeling invincible because he had become smart enough to get his away with situations, losing his heart and empathetic nature in the process. Take for example, when the cops tell the classic fox, cabbage and rabbit riddle to Lester and he comes up with the solution in a minute, but just a few minutes later, when Molly tells the story of Gandhi losing his shoe from a train and hence throwing the other one too, so whoever finds them can have some use of them, Lester fails to comprehend the reason behind this.

Tone.

True Detective is moody. The concept itself is dark, revolving around serial killers and paedophiles. It’s not as dark as Hannibal, but it’s dark. A lot of the times, there was a lot more emphasis on the tone, like it was making up for the thinly stretched story.

Fargo is witty. Despite all the crazy stuff going down, characters are cheerful every once in a while and there a lot of scenes where you can make many different inferences from the same lines. Also, it has these little stories and riddles that pull you in and teach you little lessons of life. You could say it’s one of the darkest comedies or one of the funniest yet beautiful crime stories. Fargo transitions very smoothly from serious to funny to serious again, often being bad-ass and funny at the same time. (The building shootout is my favourite TV scene)

Acting.

Both Matthew McConaughey and Woody Harrelson do their job really well, and the acting’s the best part of TD. You could feel the detectives living their lives, relate to their thoughts, especially Rust’s and hope that he has a happy ending and some closure.

In Fargo, Billy Bob Thornton plays the baddie, and I think the Internet agrees that this is his best role to date. Martin Freeman’s acting is good, but as there a lot of other characters, you don’t see much of it. But the side characters are charming enough to glue you to the story too, including the henchmen Mr Numbers and Mr Wrench.

All being said, I liked True Detective but it had no re-watch value. I loved Fargo as it swayed from the mainstream, and had a much more satisfying and beautiful ending.

True Detective- 7/10.

Fargo- 9.5/10

What do you think?